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傅正明
藏頭詩 鵬程萬里 （雙語本 自譯）
The Fabled Roc Flies Ten Thousand Miles
鵬翼鱗光出故淵，
The winged roc with gleaming scales flies out of his native ocean ,
程程破霧越雲巔，
Piercing clouds and soaring up to the summit with strong emotion,
萬關千劫攀高處，
Passing a million trials, falling upon the fair shore to drop anchor,
里陌原來勝御前。
He finds his home water better than the imperial pool in splendor.
謝謝唱和，還可以注意平仄寫成七絕。
哈哈，写得不错。
翻译嘛，第一句加个韵脚。
接着翻译哈。
展翅高飞
金童心
展召本是御前猫，
翅膀初丰学缚妖。
高山路远循古道，
飞越重洋上云霄。
傅正明
藏頭詩 鵬程萬里 （雙語本 自譯）
The Fabled Roc Flies A Millian meters
鵬翼鱗光出故淵，
The winged roc with gleaming scales flies out of his native water,
程程破霧越雲巔，
Piercing clouds and soaring up to the summit with strong emotion,
萬關千劫攀高處，
Passing a million trials, falling upon the fair shore to drop anchor,
里陌原來勝御前。
He finds his home water better than the imperial pool in splendor.